曲度著:五絕.怎知擒入籠-暨五言絕句構章新法探討(19)

曲度著:五絕.怎知擒入籠-暨五言絕句構章新法探討(19)

五絕.禿鷲 --下平六麻

居峭望雲霞,
翔空游海涯.
怎知擒入籠,
日夜念回家.

D.QU 2015.4.20 IN PARIS
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  五絕。禿鷲　--下平六麻

    居峭望天霞，  
古：平仄仄平平　 ◆霞【下平六麻】
今：平仄仄平平　 ◆霞【一麻,a,ia,ua】
    翔空游海涯。 --------------------------->原式:平平仄仄平(第3字用中).
古：平平平仄平　 ◆涯【下平六麻】
今：平平平仄平　 ◆涯【一麻,a,ia,ua】

    怎知擒入籠，  
古：仄平平仄仄　 ◆籠【上聲一董】
今：仄平平仄仄　 ◆籠【十一庚】
    日夜念回家。  
古：仄仄仄平平　 ◆家【下平六麻】
今：仄仄仄平平　 ◆家【一麻,a,ia,ua】

D。QU　2015。4。20　IN　PARIS  

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曲度著:中國古典格律詩詞之五言絕句構篇作法探討系列


序言:

1.五言絕句構章作法之一
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150409/info-1281400-1-1.html
2.五言絕句構章作法之二
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150409/info-1281405-1-1.html
3.五言絕句構章作法之三
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150409/info-1281408-1-1.html
4.五言絕句構章作法之四
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150409/info-1281436-1-1.html
5.五言絕句構章作法之五
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150410/info-1281637-1-1.html
6.五言絕句構章作法之六
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150412/info-1282131-1-1.html
7.五言絕句構章作法之七
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150412/info-1282161-1-1.html
8.五言絕句構章作法之八
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150412/info-1282162-1-1.html
9.五言絕句構章作法之九
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150412/info-1282218-1-1.html
10.五言絕句構章作法之十
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150413/info-1282241-1-1.html  
11.五言絕句構章作法之十一
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150413/info-1282256-1-1.html
12.五言絕句構章作法之十二
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150414/info-1282819-1-1.html
13.五言絕句構章作法之十三
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150414/info-1282820-1-1.html
14.五言絕句構章作法之十四
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150415/info-1282847-1-1.html
15.五言絕句構章作法之十五
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150415/info-1283101-1-1.html
16.五言絕句構章作法之十六
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150416/info-1283351-1-1.html
17.五言絕句構章作法之十七
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150417/info-1283409-1-1.html
18.五言絕句構章作法之十八
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150417/info-1283410-1-1.html
19.五言絕句構章作法之十九
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150421/info-1284178-1-1.html
20.五言絕句構章作法之二十
https://big5.backchina.com/forum/20150421/info-1284182-1-1.html
           
(待續)
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