Sweet Sixteen 系列3 (非洲裔女孩)

在美國許多地區，女孩到了16歲要舉行成人Party，謂之Sweet Sixteen。在Party Date所有同學和同學的父母及女孩本人的父母.親戚都盛裝出席。女孩身著晚禮服.頭戴皇冠乘坐"悍馬"加長禮車來到宴會廳。Party氣氛隆重熱烈:有才藝表演.獻＋六枝玫塊.切生日蛋糕等等，女孩在期間要換二.三套禮服，最後女孩和來賓一起狂舞到深亱......，預示著女孩人生新時期的開始。(以後有機會發－些Party Date的片子)。
  在Party前，女孩會拍一套相片,並製作成相冊,以資紀念。





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哈！搶到沙發。。頂一個。。。
拍的絕對經典。。抓的神態非常到位。。。。
有機會多指導。。特別喜歡6，9，15

要拍好深色膚色的人像才最考功底.贊.

這可真叫絕，人物神態太棒了。

拍得真好。

精美人物PP! 特別喜歡#16。 學習了!

These photos captured the young girl's wonderful golden age and froze it in her memory for the rest of her whole life. You have done a wonderful job. The girl must be very happy with them.

很棒!

精彩之極, 尤其喜歡最後一張

1號，光線不好，給人感覺皮膚粗燥，臟，2號，構圖呆板，手腕有贅肉，手臂太粗不美，3，4，5號剪裁有問題，小腹以下裸肉，沒有東西，給觀眾視覺不舒服，6號，用光有問題，顴骨高光出現色塊，好像是癬，手臂高光溢出，奇怪為什麼給手臂怎麼強的光，想表現什麼呢？以下各號？？？

I will have to agree with some of your thoughts. Looks like you have a pair of sharp and trained eyes. While we all looked at the beautiful side, you have spotted the places that can be improved. If the author takes some of your opinions as constructive suggestions, these photos can definitely be better. For example, in # 1, the part of the shoulder that is granny can be smoothed out with PS. The one that 手腕有贅肉 can be simply cropped out. That will still be a good photo. # 6 can be adjusted with simple leveling. Your opinion on # 3, 4, and 5, is a mater of personal opinion. If the author wants to express a sexy body, that cropping will give you a lot room for imagination. On the other hand if you are having a problem of sexy body, then you could be offended by it. If you could provide some suggestions at the same time pointing out the down side, it will help others to improve. I am also looking forward to your photos. Nice chat.

1號，光線不好，給人感覺皮膚粗燥，臟，2號，構圖呆板，手腕有贅肉，手臂太粗不美，3，4，5號剪裁有問題，小腹以下裸肉，沒有東西，給觀眾視覺不舒服，6號，用光有問題，顴骨高光出現色塊，好像是癬，手臂高光溢出， ...
聞一 發表於 2009-3-18 08:12

1號，光線不好，給人感覺皮膚粗燥，臟，2號，構圖呆板，手腕有贅肉，手臂太粗不美，3，4，5號剪裁有問題，小腹以下裸肉，沒有東西，給觀眾視覺不舒服，6號，用光有問題，顴骨高光出現色塊，好像是癬，手臂高光溢出， ...
聞一 發表於 2009-3-18 08:12

期待你的作品來比較比較..

I will have to say that even though he is arrogant, some of what he said make sense.

期待你的作品來比較比較..
luckshy 發表於 2009-3-18 10:52

1號，光線不好，給人感覺皮膚粗燥，臟，2號，構圖呆板，手腕有贅肉，手臂太粗不美，3，4，5號剪裁有問題，小腹以下裸肉，沒有東西，給觀眾視覺不舒服，6號，用光有問題，顴骨高光出現色塊，好像是癬，手臂高光溢出， ...
聞一 發表於 2009-3-18 08:12

I will have to agree with some of your thoughts. Looks like you have a pair of sharp and trained eyes. While we all looked at the beautiful side, you have spotted the places that can be improved. If the author takes some of your opinions as constructive suggestions, these photos can definitely be better. For example, in # 1, the part of the shoulder that is granny can be smoothed out with PS. The one that 手腕有贅肉 can be simply cropped out. That will still be a good photo. # 6 can be adjusted with simple leveling. Your opinion on # 3, 4, and 5, is a mater of personal opinion. If the author wants to express a sexy body, that cropping will give you a lot room for imagination. On the other hand if you are having a problem of sexy body, then you could be offended by it. If you could provide some suggestions at the same time pointing out the down side, it will help others to improve. I am also looking forward to your photos. Nice chat.

本人基本同意XZjluo的觀點,謝謝聞一的敏銳觀察力。希望"攝影天地"里多些心平氣和的藝術探討及對作品不足之處的意見，這對本人及其它影友都會有提高。期待中...........

哈！搶到沙發。。頂一個。。。
拍的絕對經典。。抓的神態非常到位。。。。
有機會多指導。。特別喜歡6，9，15
班頭 發表於 2009-3-17 08:17

謝班頭，有時能搶到"沙發"感到很幸運,多提寶貴意見哦！

要拍好深色膚色的人像才最考功底.贊.
Andy(路遙) 發表於 2009-3-17 10:03

謝謝路遙君！君子一言......，我沒食言。

打狗棒 發表於 2009-3-17 10:08

謝打狗棒！尊駕光臨，請多指教！

這可真叫絕，人物神態太棒了。
媽媽咪 發表於 2009-3-17 15:25

謝謝媽媽咪厚愛。

拍得真好。
qionghua 發表於 2009-3-17 20:23

謝謝瓊華。