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bubbleink 發表於 2005-3-27 02:12 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
They don't have names yet...

Friends, good friends, and best ones
Always keep you as busy as they can
Asking if you have any plans
In the day and at night
Never got off your sight
Why couldn't you give me a rest?
'Cause I need to be relaxed
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Listen to what you say
You said if you have money, you would pay
And your money were spent during the day
I don』t care what games you play
Give my money back, s』il vous plait
(最後一句是法語,不然俺找不到能押韻的詞拉。 意思是please.
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I』m sorry but I lied
I didn』t do what I said
I have been so bad
Till the day I would be dead
I』ll still be occupied C
To tell you why I lied
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I know you』re romantic
Make me think automatic
Think how we make out
When we go out
But you』re not single-minded
Girls aren』t toys
Finish playing, throw in the toilettes
If you』re cheating on me
Telling you right now C
My heart can』t take it anymore.
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Cigarettes are so harmful.
But why are they so playful?
It seems so enjoyable
But they』re still harmful
I just don』t understand
Why dad is addicted so bad
Look at that black-ish smog
How』d you ever think it』s good?
Cigarettes make me sick
Because they』re so disgusted.
Plz stop it, dad.
And all my other smoking friends
I don』t wanna get second-handed
And end my life with it。
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I want a dog, mom
big and cute
Because I get scared mom
When I』m home alone.
I just feel so insecure, mom
Feel like if I don't care about myself, no body will.
but how'd this happen when i have so many friends?
so many mysteries, mom
in my life hanging there.
i try to avoid them mom
but  they're all lookin for me.
like the scary movie "hide and seek" mom
i don't want them to ever find me
but how can I mom?
knowing I can't hide.
想念變成懷念 心動變成心碎
偏偏還會在乎 伱最後屬於誰..

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purple 發表於 2005-4-10 06:41 | 只看該作者
good poems...meaningful..fully supporting you.
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Adelyn 發表於 2005-4-10 14:12 | 只看該作者

so nice

"I want to know" or "I am puzzled" as the title?

(No.2, line 6) Give my money back, s』il vous plait (and [give me] a peaceful day?)
(No.5, line 6) Why dad is addicted so bad (why addicted so badly is dad?)
(No.5, line10) Because they』re so disgusted (so disgusting? make me feel so disgusted?)
(No.5, line14) And end my life with it (And live my life along with it?)
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 樓主| bubbleink 發表於 2005-4-12 06:02 | 只看該作者
if i change "Give my money back, s』il vous plait" to "(and [give me] a peaceful day?)"
it won't rhyme.  

lolz but thankz... my grammars are really bad [:465:]
想念變成懷念 心動變成心碎
偏偏還會在乎 伱最後屬於誰..
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