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Cinderellaaa 發表於 2005-1-29 18:10 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
Message:
Chinie is
a typical college girl who enjoys life to the
fullest. She loves her boyfriend so much and
texts
him every now and then. JM is Chinie's
boyfriend
who works in a call center in Ortigas. He's
always
busy doing so many things. He only manage
to
reply to Chinie's texts when he got off from
work.
One time JM receive a message from
Chinie: "hi
baby! how r u? miss u! call me when u come
home k?! tc! lovu!" JM ignored the message
because he always receive the same
message
whenever it is time for him to go home from
work. "baby,i miss u already! did u eat yet?!
take
care when u go home! ill be w8ing 4 ur call.
lovu!" "baby,where r u?! u're not replying to my
msg. well,ill b here w8ing for ur call! lovu!" JM
reaches home and lay on his bed. The last
time
he knew is tha he's reading Chinie's text. He
was
so tired he fall asleep and wasn't able to
return
Chinie's call. He can still hear his phone
beeps
but he's too tired to take a glimpse on the
message. When he woke up the next day, he
remember that he needs to call Chinie. He
ignored
the messages and dialed Chinie's #. No
one's
answering in her house. He called up her
cellphone and he was surprised that her
father
answered the call. In his voice you can feel
his
tears and hear his heart tearing
apart. "JM,why'd u
call just now? Chinie's been waiting for
u!" "Dad
sorry.i was tired so i fell asleep. i called at
home
but noone answered.wher are u now?." "just
wait
for us at home" JM went to Chinie's house
and
much to his surprised he saw a lot of people
inside. The house were so lighted but you
can
see
the gloom on every person you'll meet there.
He
was greeted by Chinie's mom on tears. She
hug
him tight and cried on his shoulders. "Chinie
was
waiting for u. she didnt go out with us coz she
was waiting for ur call. she was killed las
night
by
some robbers who came in here. she's
gone
JM,
she's gone" "Ma,Chinie texted me last
night..how
could that have happened?!" JM can't look
who's
inside the coffin. He can't move and it feels
like
his whole body is stucked on the chair his
seating. He wanted to cry but it seems that
something is blocking his tears to fall down.
He
turn to his phone and read the messages of
Chinie. "baby, ill be w8ing for u to call. i wont
go
out with dad anymore!" "baby, im scared. i
think
theres som1 downstairs. pls call me
already!" "baby, theyre here. wut f they kill me.
pls call me. baby where r u? i need you here
now. please baby i can hear them
come..." "baby.... i love you!..." He wanted to
shout and cry so loud. It's true that Chinie is
waiting for his call. Up to her last breath she
only
thinks about him. He stare at Chinie inside
the
coffin. Suddenly tears starts flowing down his
cheeks. He can't say anything. The only
words
he
uttered... "My baby, i'm so sorry! I could have
known, i could have fight for you! i'm really
sorry! I
love you so much!"

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Adelyn 發表於 2005-2-2 02:54 | 只看該作者

O, so sad a story you tell...

My take is that the story wants you to learn to pay attention to the person near you. But that's not all it asks for: A more difficult task but quite worthwhile is to develop a second sense about what you hear. The words that are delivered to you may have another meaning need you to dig out.  Learn this skill and you'll be paid richly.
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