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Elex, one more favour please.

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Out Of Sight 發表於 2004-12-21 19:01 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
Could you please elaborate your comment on the "yep" at the end of "Thinking Aloud"?

I was sort of hesitating, when I almost fininshed, over the appropriateness of putting it at the end. I should have known better not to, since it's a slang word which quite stands out like a soring thumb.

I was wondering if you meant that when you said that it spoilt the whole article?

Many thanks!
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Elex 發表於 2004-12-21 22:04 | 只看該作者

You're right.

You said it. 1) "Yep" is a slang and doesn't belong to a formal essay; 2) It's very abrupt at the end, really like a rude interruption.
By the way, sorry for my 'guess", just noticed your icon.
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