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[原創] 學寫14行詩「最真的夢」 A Very Real Dream (Sonnet)

作者:劉小曼  於 2016-9-7 20:22 發表於 最熱鬧的華人社交網路--貝殼村

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關鍵詞:thousands, silence, setting, window, closed

#1  [原創] 學寫14行詩「最真的夢」 A Very Real Dream (Sonnet)
A Very Real Dream

Singing in my room with the window closed
I wish to have a setting of silence
Following the lovely song I just chose
I hope  to do a fantastic  performance


It feels like a singer with thousands of fans
Who scream my name at the top of their lungs
Waving at me with glow sticks on their hands
They make me look like one of those top guns



Suddenly, my laptop screen goes black out
Without giving me a bit of warning
It must be the battery, with no doubt
I stop singing, something there is shining

On the window, there is a sunlight beam
Oh, what I went through is only a dream!


我的窗口關著,我在唱歌
希望不會打擾了鄰人
跟著我選好的我喜歡的歌曲,
我希望自己能唱得好

自己就恍如一名歌手
有著萬千粉絲對我盡情歡呼,喝彩
對我揮舞手中的熒光棒
他們的捧場讓我感覺自己就是大腕

突然間,我的電腦一片黑暗
哎呀,一點警示都沒有
肯定是電池又沒電了,不容置疑
我停下來,看見有東西在閃亮

在窗台上,那是太陽的光線哪
哦,剛剛經歷的只不過是一場夢

By Xiaoman

June 24, 2014

http://www.writingforums.com/thr ... t)?highlight=sonnet



使君才氣卷波瀾。與把好詩再譯
2016-9-6 22:41
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小草

#2  
Woohoo, what an amazing sonnet you have composed! Perdie Humdinger!


2016-9-6 23:44
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小草

#3  
Ok, it might be your typo, you can't have my the best ...blah...blah..right?


2016-9-7 02:38
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Xiaoman

#4  
thank you Little Grass. fantastic now.

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