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混在美國名校(45)---展翅高飛翔之這就是奇迹

作者:海攀  於 2011-3-30 22:22 發表於 最熱鬧的華人社交網路--貝殼村

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鄭衛痛得「哎呀」叫了一聲,使勁摔一下胳膊,卻沒能把小四甩開,只使得小四的雙手捏得不那麼重了。他哆哆嗦嗦去扯信口,一使勁,一下子把信封攔腰扯斷。他抽出信紙,掃了一眼,只看到幾個字:很高興……包括學費和生活費,還有一串天文數字般的美元數碼,隨即他象是被電擊中一般,發出一聲慘叫,然後猛然把雙手高高舉到空中,揚著頭,嘴對著屋頂,「啊啊」地發出極端狂喜的大叫。

 

小四的眼睛已經不能聚焦了,根本沒有看清信上寫的是什麼,可是鄭衛的反應明確地告訴他,他就要留北京了,他的全家都有救了,他這個農村孩子的命運,在這一眨眼間完全改變了。太爽了,太棒啦,比做夢都好的多,比上天堂更美妙!他一隻手抓住鄭衛的胳膊,另一隻手舉到空中,也象鄭衛一樣瘋狂地大叫著。他們兩個人狼也似的吼叫,震天動地,聲勢驚人。

 

屋內的兄弟們也全都明白過來,鄭衛拿到全獎了,而且是王冠的,真是太奇怪太驚人太不可能了,都跳起來又叫又嚷,亂成一團。劉娟也是笑靨如花,鼓掌稱慶。只有老七搶過鄭衛的信仔細讀起來,心裡又是羨慕又是嫉妒,直後悔自己當初怎麼就沒敢報王冠大學,太膽小了,太沒用了,鄭衛這樣的都能去,自己肯定沒問題。他一點都不知道,鄭衛費了多大的勁,使了多少手段,才拿到的這封信。

 

鄭衛發泄地差不多了,從老七手上搶過信,撒腿往外跑。所有人都知道,他這是要去向女朋友報喜。跑過劉娟身邊時,他停下來一把抓過劉娟的手握了一下,喊了聲「謝謝」,又狂奔而去。劉娟笑著甩了甩被他握疼的手,對大家揮手告別。老七趕快跟上來說:「我送送你吧。」

 

要是以往,劉娟會說:「不用了。」她就是這樣的人,保守而不解風情。可能今天心情好,也可能是老七沮喪的表情使她動了惻隱之心,這次她沒有拒絕。下樓梯時,老七嘆道:「真想不到,鄭衛那樣的,居然……居然……」劉娟理解地說:「他其實不差。」老七悲哀道:「可是運氣更好呀!難道我比他差嗎?唉,我怎麼辦呢?只有兩個半獎。」劉娟安慰他說:「再等一下。」老七隻剩兩所學校沒有消息了,心知希望不大,不由地搖搖頭,嘆了一口氣,又搖了搖頭,一副垂頭喪氣的樣子。

 

出了樓門默默地走了一會,劉娟說:「不行就用這兩個學校試一下吧。」老七說:「可是美國那麼貴,怎麼生活呀?」劉娟不看他,停了一下說:「我有錢,兩個人夠了。」老七明白她的意思,感動得眼淚汪汪。他突然抓過劉娟的手,低下頭以迅雷不及掩耳之勢親了一口,嚇得劉娟趕快抽手,還向四周望了望,幸虧沒人注意他們。

 

老七的痛苦,已經變成了激動和幸福,還沒來得及細細體驗,劉娟就急忙叉開話題問:「小四今天是怎麼了?」老七回了一下神,想起來也覺得不可思議:「是啊,挺怪的,他怎麼也激動成那樣?他平常挺沉穩的呀。鄭衛跟他,也就一般吧。今天他是怎麼了?」想一想又說:「快畢業了,大家好象都不一樣了。」劉娟看了他一眼,不知道他所說的大家包不包括自己。

 

過了二天,劉娟也收到了王冠大學的全獎。幾個月後,全班同學終於明白了,為什麼鄭衛出國,小四也會激動地發瘋。

 

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回復 玉石 2011-3-30 23:33
美夢成真。
回復 BL_518 2011-3-31 00:49
功夫不負有心人~~~~~膽大的不一定被撐死~~~~~希望不要有什麼破綻~~~~~~
回復 海攀 2011-3-31 05:51
混出去了:)
回復 海攀 2011-3-31 06:10
Hello, Smartman: 回復你昨天的貼子:

楚柴 gives very good comments and his points mostly agree with mine.

But, he misunderstood me when I discussed about Liu Juan.  Of course I understand Liu is not a main figure.  Xiao4 is also not a main figure.  To make Xiao4's behavious reasonable, the author did spare some space to outline his background.  However, the author did not give any background on Liu Juan.  So, I got a lot of questions on Liu Juan.  I did not ask for 比塑造平常人更多的細節支持. Rather, I only ask for minimal 細節支持 that could convince readers about Liu Juan.

Let me list a few queries briefly:
1.  I have never in my lifetime met a girl, who is beautiful, smart and diligent and constantly maintaining #1 in a best school either in China or US.  I can't believe in such a perfect figure.  How come she has been so motivated and studied so hard tirelessly?  What drove her all the years around?
2.  Why has Liu been so smart to always maintain #1 in a best school, even if she is a hard-worker?  How about her childhood, elementary, junior high and senior high school ages?
3.  How about her family background?  If Xiao4 can't afford US school application fee and Zheng can hardly afford (had not been for Yang's family help), how can Liu afford?
blah, blah, ...

In summary, I can't accept the existence of such a perfect figure, which is non-existent in real life, unless the author could render convincing details.

有的人天生聰明能幹,你都不知道他/她的腦子是怎麼長的。我年輕時碰到過一個校花,比劉娟更完美,到現在我也想不出她有什麼缺點。我覺得她唯一的缺點就是---看不上我 :)

鄭衛家不是出不起這筆錢,是楊小靜家硬要掏。這不是編的,當時就是這樣。可能是追求一種平衡吧,你家出人,我家出錢。以楊小靜的子弟班背景,這種投資絕對賺。

謝謝看的這樣細,想的那麼深。
回復 smartman 2011-3-31 12:37
海攀: Hello, Smartman: 回復你昨天的貼子:

楚柴 gives very good comments and his points mostly agree with mine.

But, he misunderstood me when I discussed a ...
... "我年輕時碰到過一個校花,比劉娟更完美,到現在我也想不出她有什麼缺點。"...

I didn't have such luck.  I can hardly imagine such a girl in the best college in China or US.  You can hardly find anyone consistently ranking #1 every year, not to mention a girl.  Anyway, that is your story and you are the author. :-)
回復 nnzzll 2011-3-31 21:17
海攀: Hello, Smartman: 回復你昨天的貼子:

楚柴 gives very good comments and his points mostly agree with mine.

But, he misunderstood me when I discussed a ...
你很老嗎
回復 smartman 2011-3-31 21:36
nnzzll: 你很老嗎
Nope, I don't think so.  The author should be Zheng Wei's age, fresh out of college in late 90s.  He could very likely be an early 80s or a late 70s. :-)
回復 nnzzll 2011-3-31 21:40
smartman: Nope, I don't think so.  The author should be Zheng Wei's age, fresh out of college in late 90s.  He could very likely be an early 80s or a late 70s.  ...
我覺得他最少late 70s。說不定是70-72年生人,現在38-40歲左右。
回復 smartman 2011-3-31 21:44
nope, i don't think he can be an early 70s.  his novel story does not seem to fit into college lives for an early 70s.
回復 海攀 2011-3-31 22:06
Thank you guys. Actually I am not Zheng Wei.

Author could be any age but the story is about late 90s to mid-00s.
回復 海攀 2011-3-31 22:11
smartman: ... "我年輕時碰到過一個校花,比劉娟更完美,到現在我也想不出她有什麼缺點。"...

I didn't have such luck.  I can hardly imagine such a gir ...
She's learning Biology. For engineering or physics, mathematics, boys are better than girls.
回復 smartman 2011-3-31 22:15
海攀: Thank you guys. Actually I am not Zheng Wei.

Author could be any age but the story is about late 90s to mid-00s.
I never, ever thought you are Zheng Wei.  I just thought you were Zheng Wei's classmate or schoolmate.
回復 smartman 2011-3-31 22:19
海攀: She's learning Biology. For engineering or physics, mathematics, boys are better than girls.
Okay, I see the possible point.  Biology department has ~50% girls while engineering departments (typically CS or EE) has 10%-20% female in China's best school.  So, virtually in China's best school, girls can hardly sit constantly on number 1 seat in math/physics/engineering department.
回復 rongrongrong 2011-10-19 08:45
  

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