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tycm 發表於 2005-12-21 18:26 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
1。寫作課是以每星期兩次的方式進行的。

2。無論是誰拔掉了那顆樹,都應該為自己感到羞愧。

3。我們到達那裡時又累又餓,最糟糕的是我們找不到任何食物。

4。據信,囚犯是在午夜時分翻牆逃跑的。

5。跟許多別的學校相比,這所學校的學費是低的。

6.只要你不斷努力,你遲早會解決這個難題的。

7.醫療隊並沒有一味抱怨當地醫院的工作條件。比如說:好幾位醫生曾用自己的錢購買了簡單的醫療器械。

請各兄弟看看,能不能出出主意,謝謝。

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cwjjzhou 發表於 2005-12-21 19:16 | 只看該作者

how do you think this?

1.        寫作課是以每星期兩次的方式進行的。
1.The writing class is carried on by twice a week

2。無論是誰拔掉了那顆樹,都應該為自己感到羞愧。
2 No matter Who has pulled out that tree,  one will feel ashamed of oneself.

3。我們到達那裡時又累又餓,最糟糕的是我們找不到任何食物。
3. when we arrived there, we were tired and hungry; what』s worst,  we couldn』t find any food..

4。據信,囚犯是在午夜時分翻牆逃跑的。
4. According to what is believed, the prisoner escaped by climbing over the wall.

5。跟許多別的學校相比,這所學校的學費是低的。
5. Compared with many other schools'tuition fee , this school』s is low.

6.只要你不斷努力,你遲早會解決這個難題的。
6. So long as you keep working hard, you will solve this difficult problem sooner or later

7.醫療隊並沒有一味抱怨當地醫院的工作條件。比如說:好幾位醫生曾用自己的錢購買了簡單的醫療器械。
7. The medical team certainly didn』t complain constantly about the working condition of the local hospital. For instance, Quite a few doctors once used their own money to purchase the simple medical instruments.
多一絲快樂, 少一些煩惱;
不論鈔票多少, 只要開心就好;
累了就睡, 醒來就微笑;
生活是什麼滋味, 還得自己放調料;
一切隨緣, 童心到老, 快樂一生
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montrealer 發表於 2005-12-22 09:30 | 只看該作者
我的只是直譯,地道談不上.

1. 寫作課是以每星期兩次的方式進行的。
1.This writing class will meet twice a week

2。無論是誰拔掉了那顆樹,都應該為自己感到羞愧。
2 Whoever has pulled down the tree, he will feel ashamed of himself.

3。我們到達那裡時又累又餓,最糟糕的是我們找不到任何食物。
3. By the time we arrived there, we were tired and hungry. The  worst thing was nothing we could find to eat.

4。據信,囚犯是在午夜時分翻牆逃跑的。
The prisoner might have escaped by climbing over the wall at midnight according to some resource.

5。跟許多別的學校相比,這所學校的學費是低的。
5. Compared to many other schools' tuition-fee, this school』s fee is quite low.

6.只要你不斷努力,你遲早會解決這個難題的。
6. So long as you keep trying hard, you will solve the difficult problem sooner or later

7.醫療隊並沒有一味抱怨當地醫院的工作條件。比如說:好幾位醫生曾用自己的錢購買了簡單的醫療器械。
7. The medical team didn』t constantly complain about the work environment of the local hospital. In contrast, for instance, several doctors once used their own money to purchase the simple medical instruments.
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bluepolish 發表於 2005-12-22 16:50 | 只看該作者
3。我們到達那裡時又累又餓,最糟糕的是我們找不到任何食物。
3. By the time we arrived there, we were tired and hungry. The worst thing was nothing we could find to eat.

i perfer putting in this way as following:

when/ by the time arrived there under / with tireness and hungriness, the worst was we found nothing to eat up.

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montrealer 發表於 2005-12-23 08:33 | 只看該作者
送交者: bluepolish 12/22/05, 16:50
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3。我們到達那裡時又累又餓,最糟糕的是我們找不到任何食物。
3. By the time we arrived there, we were tired and hungry. The worst thing was nothing we could find to eat.

i perfer putting in this way as following:

when/ by the time arrived there under / with tireness and hungriness, the worst was we found nothing (什麼也沒有) to eat up (怎麼吃掉).[/COLOR]

Web Search: Dictionary. Find. in. Click here to search all of MSN Encarta. Dictionary. Search for "eat up" in all of MSN Encarta. eat up. eat up. verb. Definitions: 1. ... transitive and intransitive verb eat completely[/COLOR]: to consume food completely or with great appetite ...

另外,你用","連句,主語成了the worst, the worst arrived ? 不用主語要說by the time arriving there,
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montrealer 發表於 2005-12-23 08:47 | 只看該作者
現在口語時毛說: We couldn't find nothing to eat.兩個否定,電影生活中常用. eg: We didn't do nothing.低下層人士或普通人用語.語法書會說:We didn't do anything.但就好辣手一樣說慣了就算對.
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montrealer 發表於 2005-12-23 09:13 | 只看該作者
我剛才看電視上說:I don't know nothing about no kid.
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TheYeti3 發表於 2006-1-9 12:23 | 只看該作者
1. This writing class meets twice a week.

2. Whoever removed/cut down/pulled down that tree should feel ashamed.

3. We were tired and hungry by the time we arrived there; worse yet, we couldn't find anything to eat.  (not 「eat up」.)

4. It is alleged that the prisoner has escaped by climbing over the wall at midnight.

5. Compared to many others, the tuition of this school is rather low.

6. So long as you keep working at it, you will solve this problem sooner or later.

7. The medical team never did complaint incessantly about the working condition in the local hospital, even when several doctors had to used their own money to purchase simple medical equipment.
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TheYeti3 發表於 2006-1-9 12:34 | 只看該作者

re: 我剛才看電視上說:I don't know nothing about no kid.

Black comedian cum celebrity cum black community leader Bill Crosby made wave, or rather, a tsunami, last year, when he blasted the black community for perpetuating "Bad English" and a culture of aversion to academia.  Jessie Jackson was also present during the outburst.
I also have a cartoon somewhere, but I cannot find it at this moment.

  Source:http://www.cnn.com/2004/US/07/01/cosby.comments.ap/
Bill Cosby has more harsh words for black community
Friday, July 2, 2004 Posted: 2:41 PM EDT (1841 GMT)
CHICAGO, Illinois (AP) -- Bill Cosby went off on another tirade against the black community Thursday, telling a room full of activists that black children are running around not knowing how to read or write and "going nowhere."

(Excerpts):
...Cosby made headlines in May when he upbraided some poor blacks for their grammar and accused them of squandering opportunities the civil rights movement gave them. ..

...He shot back Thursday, saying his detractors were trying in vain to hide the black community's "dirty laundry."
"Let me tell you something, your dirty laundry gets out of school at 2:30 every day, it's cursing and calling each other n------ as they're walking up and down the street," Cosby said during an appearance at the Rainbow/PUSH Coalition & Citizenship Education Fund's annual conference.
"They think they're hip," the entertainer said. "They can't read; they can't write. They're laughing and giggling, and they're going nowhere."...

..."I can't even talk the way these people talk, 'Why you ain't,' 'Where you is' ... and I blamed the kid until I heard the mother talk," Cosby said then. "And then I heard the father talk ... Everybody knows it's important to speak English except these knuckleheads. You can't be a doctor with that kind of crap coming out of your mouth."...  (i)

...Cosby elaborated Thursday on his previous comments in a talk interrupted several times by applause. He castigated some blacks, saying that they cannot simply blame whites for problems such as teen pregnancy and high school dropout rates....
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