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angelo391969 發表於 2006-10-21 02:59 | 只看該作者 回帖獎勵 |倒序瀏覽 |閱讀模式
When I Whine  
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Today, upon a bus, I saw a girl with golden hair
I looked at her and sighed and wished I was as fair.
When suddenly she rose to leave,
I saw her hobble down the aisle.
She had one leg and used a crutch
But as she passed, she passed a smile.
Oh, God, forgive me when I whine
I have 2 legs, the world is mine.
I stopped to buy some candy
The lad who sold it had such charm
I talked with him a while, he seemed so very glad
If I were late, it'd do no harm.
And as I left, he said to me,
"I thank you, you've been so kind.
It's nice to talk with folks like you.
You see," he said, "I'm blind."
Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.
I have 2 eyes, the world is mine.
Later while walking down the street,
I saw a child with eyes of blue
He stood and watched the others play
He did not know what to do.
I stopped a moment and then I said,
"Why don't you join the others, dear?"
He looked ahead without a word.
And then I knew, he couldn't hear.
Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.
I have 2 ears, the world is mine.
With feet to take me where I'd go.
With eyes to see the sunset's glow.
With ears to hear what I would know.
Oh, God, forgive me when I whine.
I've been blessed indeed, The world is mine.
If this poem makes you feel like I felt,
just forward it to all your  friends,
after all, it's just a simple reminder....
We have so  much to be thankful for!!!
  
Sorrow looks back,
Worry looks around,
Faith looks up.

[ 本帖最後由 zzyzx 於 2006-10-24 06:41 編輯 ]

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 樓主| angelo391969 發表於 2006-10-21 21:41 | 只看該作者
sorry for my wrong spelling---when I whine instead of when i whinne.
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zzyzx 發表於 2006-10-22 12:17 | 只看該作者
You yourself can edit what you have posted by clicking  編輯
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 樓主| angelo391969 發表於 2006-10-23 18:31 | 只看該作者
i'll pay more attention next time,thank you.
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