Little Kiss[原創]

Oneday，a girl who seems likes a angel [:442:] ，she has balack hair and little pink on her face，and she has a kind heart。she has many pets：dogs、cats、birds、swans、little lion、little tiger，and so on。she has kind perents：Mr.purple and Mrs.purple。oh，sorry，i forgot to tell u all her name is Amanda。she is a irresistable girl who the boys love her so much。
     But，she had a requir：something is so demanding but so kind。that『s：she wanner a boy who can save a little-bird from a ghost[:456:] can marry her。so many boys coming by that imformation，beacuse she is a pretty girl who al over the world。
     But a great of boys scared that ghost，and they escaped[:792:]。and made Amanda is so sad about these boys who escape。she is crying almost everyday。so she played with her little pet on her parden。  [:457:] at that time，she meet a dog who can spoke，she is so strange of it，but the dog says：「pretty girl，please don』t be afraid，i『m a boy who was changed by that ghost。but i can change my boy』s body at night，i mean i can save your baby from that ghost，but just at night。and you are the only girl who can help me。」「me？how？」「you had a dress which some crystals on it。these crystals are super-star，it can kill the ghost。so i wanner borrow it to kill the ghost save your bird and ...」「and what？」「and marry you！」[:496:] Amanda is so happy this boy can save her little bird from the ghost，so tend the dress to him and waiting for his good news everyday。
      At night，the dog changes a handsome boy，he run to that forest to kill that ghost [:441:] and save Amanda『s little bird，then back。Amanda is such as happy to kiss that boy[:807:] 。then，sunshine between them，that dog is changing，he is a handsome boy who lead a kingdom next by the city，so Amanda and that boy named Charle are married ，and still go on...[:494:] [:494:] [:494:]

this is my first noval,and i hope anybody who can give me some suggestions!!!thanks very much!

Amanda,i think you can check the grammar and make the expression much clear first.

it is good. but we can always improve it if we keep on reviewing it.