10.10 today first repuplic in asia was established by Dr Sun

it is a landmark of asia.

it is still existing now, nevertheless someone denys, and someone is trying to change the name..  however, it is long live in the hearts around the earth.

it is : ??? certainly not People republic of China!


remember : it was not in japan! but china!

however, there are still so many shithead like the guy below in that place, the future is very much a question!  of cause, people have no brain will get high on anything.

[ 本帖最後由 chickenrun8 於 2006-10-10 22:43 編輯 ]

I think you have forgoten to cut your pig tail, check the mirror in your toilet!

go and wash your bird and head full of shit in!

read my lips!

樓豬，你就不要賣弄你那噁心的英文了。

頂一下樓主

'樓下豬 fztutu'，你就不要賣弄你那噁心的 中文了。

原帖由 chickenrun8 於 2006-10-10 19:23 發表

10.10 today first repuplic in asia was established by Dr Sun

哈！「 雞巴跑了 」同學，做完我布置的功課啦。前兩天我幫你的兩句短語改了八處錯誤，你怎麼把自己的「 精華 」貼都刪了？看來你沒有好好複習噢！ 交出來的作業還是不行啊。不過還能來上課，還算是好學生。好，少廢話，開講：

10.10 -- 94 years ago today, the first republic country in Asia was established.--- "today" 就是今天，如果你沒瘋掉，你就應該知道那"今天"不是今天！所以，應該是"94 years ago today"。 "asia"--特定地名頭一字母用大寫，這是常識。這共和國也不是 Dr Sun 一個人的功勞吧。

it is a landmark of asia.

It is a turning point of Asian history.-- "landmark "是標誌建築或地標的意思。Dr Sun 可沒有大興土木建亞洲或世界第一高樓什麼的。

it is still existing now, nevertheless someone denys, and someone is trying to change the name..  however, it is long live in the hearts around the earth.

It is still standing - this greatest country, even though some people deny its very existence, and yet others are trying to destroy her with futile effort.-- "existing now" 不夠文采。用"standing"--"挺立"才顯得驕傲嘛。"denys"--denys what?! 英文是要準確的。change the name -- 聽上去平淡。"destroy her with futile effort"--「徒勞地想把她毀壞」才夠意思嘛。

it is : ??? certainly not People republic of China!

It is not the country called "the People's Republic of China"!--連國名你都搞錯！愚子不可教啊！

remember : it was not in japan! but china!

這裡就不改了，回去重做！

however, there are still so many shithead like the guy below in that place, the future is very much a question!  of cause, people have no brain will get high on anything.

簡直是垃圾！垃圾！垃圾！垃圾！回去重做！

好了。下課！下一節課再這樣子，叫你家長來！

thanks for your teaching!

偉大的先行者孫中山永垂不朽！

不論是中華人民共和國，還是中華民國，只要你反對任何形式的「台獨」，承認自己是中國人，咱們就是同胞！

謝謝分享!!!

原帖由 chickenrun8 於 2006-10-11 11:00 發表
thanks for your teaching!

上面這句還沒帶家長來啊?