do you think I can be a writer?

Please check what I wrote, do you think I can Be a writer? thanks a lot!!
If I can't, please let me know the reason.

Thanks for your good suggestion, maybe under your "smart" advice, I will be a real writer. I am looking forward to the day coming soon. BTW, Could you be my that "writer"?

Finally I find some people to tell the truth. Thank you. Just like I said before, "nobody is perfect"." Why do I write ?", I just want people to correct my mistakes, If  all "advanced" people do that to me, I bet  if  there is no mistakes in it, then it will be a  perfect article, then I can be a "perfect" writer. Am I wrong?

Thanks for taking your time to read my threads. what's more, thanks for your "sincere" comments. Welcome you to make more.

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