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The Werewolf (1) : Darkness is around us

作者:漢娜神園  於 2012-1-20 07:25 發表於 最熱鬧的華人社交網路--貝殼村

作者分類:小說原創|通用分類:原創文學|已有13評論

Dear Aunties and Uncles, 

This is Hannah again! I am writing a new story called "The Werewolf", I enjoyed your comments and encouragement. My mom translated them for me. Thank you very much! I hope you would like to read this story too!

Love you all!

Hannah 

Now the story begins
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CHAPTER ONE: DARKNESS IS AROUND US 

Julia, a well behaved girl was typing away at her computer. Suddenly, Julia had the urge to go to the restroom. As she walked down the hall she made it to the bathroom. As she was opening her bathroom door, a cold blast of air greeted her. 

A chill went down her back  as she entered the dark room. Frantically, searching for the light switch Julia heard a low evil laugh.

「Heh, heh, heh.」A low menacing voice whispered. 

  「Wh-who』s there?」Julia asked frightened. 

  「Hello, Juliaaaa.」The voice said as it became louder as it spoke. 

  Forgetting to use the bathroom, Julia ran out of the scary room. Almost tripping over her kitten, Lulu, Julia ran down stairs looking for her mother. 

   「Mom?」Julia whispered. 

  Julia peeked into the living room finding out that her mother was not home. She ran outside searching for help. Julia saw the soothing scenery of the sun setting which made her calm down.

「Help! Help! My mother』s not home and I heard an evil voice in my restroom!」Julia yelled frantically.

Eyes darting from one place to another Julia searched the neighborhood for her mom. 

  「Someone, please, help me!」Julia dropped to her knees. 

  Mrs. Oliver, Julia』s neighbor walked over to her looking concerned. 

  「What happened?」Mrs. Oliver spoke in concern. 

  「MY MOM』S NOT HOME AND I HEARD AN EVIL LAUGH IN MY BATHROOM!!!」Julia cried on Mrs. Oliver』s shoulder. 

  「Don』t worry dear, we』ll find her.」Mrs. Oliver said soothingly.

「I hope we will.」Julia sobbed. 「How about I let you stay with me?」Mrs. Oliver asked her eyes sparkling.



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回復 丹奇 2012-1-20 07:51
very scary already!
回復 大唐國際 2012-1-20 07:54
Very good story, I am wondering where is her mom now?
回復 卉櫻果 2012-1-20 08:08
I was scared when reading the story, can not wait too long for the next
回復 卉櫻果 2012-1-20 08:09
I learnt a new word-frantically, thank you Hannah~
回復 poi 2012-1-20 08:57
There was a chill going down my spine
回復 布衣人 2012-1-20 09:11
DARKNESS IS AROUND US            
回復 走過青春 2012-1-20 09:40
     Very good story!

ZT
回復 不惑而言 2012-1-20 09:55
故事寫得真好,很想知道後面的故事。
回復 方方頭 2012-1-20 10:17
     scary!
回復 yulinw 2012-1-20 10:33
   不簡單,中國新年好~~
回復 麥燕萍 2012-1-20 11:02
horrible! What happen next?
回復 leahzhang 2012-1-20 23:20
Very good story, very attractive! I am waiting for the next......
回復 早安太陽 2012-1-21 03:01
我害怕了,漢娜,怎麼感覺Mrs. Oliver不是好人啊!

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