今天教授回電。我的書寫語法滿分.這本書是一本圖畫書,我現在將此書改寫成第一人稱的小說。我的英文寫作之路,難啊。
I am in labor at Methodist Hospital on November 28,2005,The pain comes in twenty-foot waves and my husband ,Travis, steps in but Ma has disappeared in her place .
"MA" ? In the corner the chair was empty .
"She had to excuse herself "My husband said to me.
Ma flew all the way from California to help me have her first grandchild,but now that she can not bear to be in the same room.I have refused drugs and labored one night into the next ,But still this baby won not come out .
"Get her ready for a C-section."Nurse said.
Doubt begins to could my head than the experts want to take over .
"But "My husband try to say something .
I told the experts "If I surrender ,I'm afraid I will want a full retreat to go all the way back.To ve the baby and not the mother .
"Well,there are your options"The doctor said.