各位:本人在學習英文寫作。一定有許多的錯誤。如果您能糾正,我萬分感激,尊為一字之師。如果不能糾正,請不要論斷批評。我的生活與你無關。神祝福您喜樂平安。
I always get up later on Saturdays .last Saturday as usual, I got up late again. But I got a call from my friend. She just arrived by air plant came to see me from China, Of course, She did not come on foot.
"Hi, My dear friend. I have been missing you, Now I am coming to see you "
"Now? Are you kidding me? I am still having my breakfast "
"What ? I am so surprised that you Americans having breakfast at lunch time? It is one o'clock now.
Yeah ,You are right ,But we are lazy bones .You even donot know that yet ?
後續:
昨天下午寫了這個小故事,晚上,正好先生有點不高興。我們就一起去飯店吃飯。吃飯前,我請他先讀這個故事。他笑逐顏開。我又請服務員讀一讀,看看她的反應。她的第一句話是,我有點糊塗了。我沒有說話,她接著說,哦,我明白了,哈哈,很有意思的故事。然後我有作了點小修改。
看樣子,我的作品起作用了。繼續加油。