Spread on the desk are drafting paper and brush
but there are no paint
Holding a brush she stares through the window
dancing outside there are freezing rain.
She wants to paint the territory, the boundaryless territory,
only finds out the sheet won』t fit in the category.
She wants to paint the drifting snow, the never end snow,
then she realizes, it』s already frozen below.
She wants to paint their love, the love was once there in May,
but the memory can』t seem to keep it stay.
There she finally finishes her painting,
the territory, the snow, the love
It shows distance, pale, and the fainting.
In the new world she looks at him again,
recognizes they are merely strangers,
and everything is just in vain.
顏瞳瞳的原詩：
深冬的空中
飄著纏綿的冷雨
憑窗的桌上
堆滿畫筆和油紙
她展開油紙，撥弄畫筆
她想畫一片土地，走不盡的土地
油紙不夠大
她想畫一場飄雪，下不停的飄雪
雪落地結成了冰
她想畫下他們的愛情，曾經的愛情
卻是記憶不起
她終於畫完
他的土地，飄雪和愛情
遙遠，蒼白，荒蕪
在不同的世界里
她遙望他
如此陌生
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- [02/20]虞美人——聽無聲 （仿蔣捷）
- [02/21]七絕——晨眺
- [02/25]江門排米粉
- [02/28] 試譯詩《在不同的世界里，遙望》
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- [03/05]七絕——和雲間鶴
- [03/09]七絕——老樹，繼續春身翠人
- [03/12]交作業 【古韻詩社第32期】多因無病呻
- [03/14]五絕兩首： 和雲間鶴
- [03/25]搗鏈子 雨中看花
- [04/02]誇海口
