今天看了剛上二年級的兒子的一篇作文,覺得不錯,特摘入日誌。為尊重作者,原文未做絲毫修改,我只負責抄寫錄入。原文如下,好文共賞:
Job』s Justin Wants to Have!
One day in a city called Inky town there was a 15 years old kid named Justin, he was a smart playful boy!
He wanted to do something interesting for his life and he decided to get a job. So he told his mother Jeawl and father Micheal and his little sister Star he was going to look for a job and so he did! He walked and walked he got to walmart he tried to get his job here but the manager said sorry you are to young to work here at Walmart..
As he walked home he saw a bus. He took the bus home. 5 years later after he was married to a jobless lady called Charm. That day he started looking for a jobs these are some. He got to see Soobeys, Markville mall, Shopers drug mart, Costco but he didn』t want any of these jobs. The next morning he went out of bed out of his house to find a job, of course he said good-bye to Charm in a loud voice, so Charm could hear. He went to his car to get to placed he might want to work at. He went off. The jobs he saw that was firing is starbucks coffee, Chapters, Angus glen, the museam, Garbage man, builder, fire fighters, library, school. He finally wants to have that』s being a copper and he got the job it was looking for so he got the job.
A few years later, they got kids. Justin was a really really really good copper and they lived happily ever after.